IELTS TASK 2_Question about aliens
Dear Sir/Ma'am,
This is my answer to the question
" Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Others scientists think this is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion"
Kindly comment on it and give me some improvements if possible, thank you:
" There is an argument about whether we should approach extraterrestrial intelligence life on other celestial bodies. While the prospect of exchanging messages with other intelligent civilizations is exciting, we certainly should not attempt to connect to them at this moment.
Broadcasting messages to outer space would be beneficial to some extent. Modern market desires extraordinary concepts and technology from outside worlds might be the answer. Corporations are competing fiercely to stay ahead of the technology curve, thus the demand for scientific breakthroughs is ever-pressing. This could be resolved by seeking solutions from other universal entities and the first messages into space would hopefully lay the groundwork for any co-operation in the future. Aliens on other planets could potentially provide us with brand-new kind of technology, which might take earthlings generations to develop, or open up different perspectives to assist with our current scientific progress.
Despite above reasonable prospect, sending messages out into space might pose more harms than advantages. Were some form of cooperation initiated after the first message exchange, we have yet to know their wisdom is worthy of our time and resources. Needless to say, this interplanetary exchange would certainly require a great deal of money as well as human resources. Furthermore, by sharing our information, the Earths’ location would be exposed to unknown threats. At worst, the replying messages could accompany a spatial attack, which would be deadly as at this moment mankind does not possess any sufficient galactic weapon to protect ourselves from the outsiders.
In conclusion, even though we are eager to associate with other intelligent life forms, it is a possibly harmful decision as our life on earth would be gravely threatened."
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" There is an argument about whether we should approach (Approach implies some physical presence. ) extraterrestrial intelligence (wrong form) life on other celestial bodies. While the prospect of exchanging messages with other intelligent civilizations is exciting, we certainly should not attempt to connect to (??
- " There is an argument about whether we should approach (Approach implies some physical presence.
- ) extraterrestrial intelligence (wrong form) life on other celestial bodies.
- While the prospect of exchanging messages with other intelligent civilizations is exciting, we certainly should not attempt to connect to (??
- contact) them at this moment.
- Broadcasting messages to outer space would be beneficial to some extent.
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" There is an argument about whether we should approach (Approach implies some physical presence. That is not in the topic.) extraterrestrial intelligence (wrong form) life on other celestial bodies. While the prospect of exchanging messages with other intelligent civilizations is exciti
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Is it a good idea to send messages to aliens in outer space?
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