IELTS task 2 writing

Today's parents spend too little time staying with their children and use television to make their children keep quiet. Explain the reason and results by using your relevant experience

It is undeniable that modern-day parents are don’t have time to stay with them, so, they decide to let their children use technological devices. This situation is the result of some reasons and causes many effects to that child.

Parents choose the way of letting children watching television for temporary purposes. In this modernized era, everyone has to work hard to earn money for satisfying their own living standard, even there are some parents have to work on weekends. Therefore, they will become tired after leaving from offices. Moreover, women have to do housework such as cooking dinner or washing clothes afterwards. As a consequence, parents can’t spend time staying with their children and choose the way of letting offspring play with themselves by using artificial things as a different way to be relaxed. Also, children are the one who is naughty and active, and they can’t even sit quietly on a place for a while. Parents will have to look after them to ensure they don’t do dangerous things, which is a struggle mission for adults. Only television or computer game will pay children’s attention.

If children become addicted with these things, it will cause a lot of harmful influences to them. Firstly, their eyesight will be affected. They will be short-sighted, seriously, for a long time, they even have visual impairment. Secondly, using technological devices too early in too much time leads to mental health. These children will prefer living in an introvert life, they find difficult or unnecessary to share feelings, opinions. Provided that this issue happens for a significant time, the child can have depression, which even causes death. Furthermore, influence comes to their physical health as well. In case of utilizing mobile phones too much, users will have a headache, insomnia, and many others diseases.

In conclusion, it is not good at all for children to contact with televisions or computers soon. As a clever parent, they should spend a little time understanding their children as a kind of relaxation.