IELTS task 2: teenagers' and adults' happiness
Thank you for your meticulous review. I'm thankful for getting such a detailed check.
However, because you changed almost all the essay and provided new ideas or examples as well, it makes me think all my ideas are meaningless and my writing is indecipherable. Therefore, I find it pretty hard for me to follow your suggestions, self-evaluate my performance and work on further improvement.
Is there another way to fix this essay?
Top answer
I think a better idea would be to write a new (different) one. That would give you a fresh opportunity to demonstrate what you've learned and avoid the old pitfalls. Don't be dismayed or disappointed.
- I think a better idea would be to write a new (different) one.
- That would give you a fresh opportunity to demonstrate what you've learned and avoid the old pitfalls.
- Don't be dismayed or disappointed.
- It's all part of the learning process.
- Keep practising, and you're sure to improve.
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I think a better idea would be to write a new (different) one. That would give you a fresh opportunity to demonstrate what you've learned and avoid the old pitfalls. Don't be dismayed or disappointed. It's all part of the learning process. Keep practising, and you're sure to improve.
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