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林子婷 Posted 7 years ago
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IELTS TASK 2 (self-employed)

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?


It is true that people have various choices about what kind of jobs they want to take. Some people may choose to work for a company while there are more prefer to be their own employers. I believe that there are several reasons behind this trend and also it brings a main drawback to our society.

From my perspective, the first and foremost reason for this trend is that being a self-employed person can obtain more freedom in their lives. Living in a competitive society, people always have a gruelling schedule and feel pressured. For office workers, they may have to face a rich variety of difficulties in the workplace such as building a relationship between their employers and themselves and managing to have a strong and friendly relationship with colleagues. In the long run, people may get tired of jobs or even their lives. Besides, as a self-employed person, people can have more leisure time to take good care of their family. It is unnecessary for parents to worry about their children during working hours. As a result, more and more people would choose to be self-employed.

However, the tendency of self-employed does lead to a major shortcoming in our lives. In my view, it is possible that people may lose connection and interaction with others. Employees can get a sense of community from companies or business and someone even takes colleagues as their family. As a consequence, if people opt to work at home, instead of going to the workplace, they may lose social bond which is absolutely a detriment to our mental health.

In conclusion, it is reasonable why this trend happened and what is the disadvantage of it for individuals.

  

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It is true that (Those words are superfluous. ) P eople have various choices about what kind of jobs they want to take. ) ) to be their own employers.

  • It is true that (Those words are superfluous.
  • ) P eople have various choices about what kind of jobs they want to take.
  • ) ) to be their own employers.
  • I believe that there are several reasons behind this trend and also it brings a main drawback is detrimental to to our society.
  • From my perspective, the first and foremost reason for this trend is that being a self-employed person can obtain has more freedom in their lives.
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It is true that (Those words are superfluous. There is no contribution to your statement.)

People have various choices about what kind of jobs they want to take. Some people may choose to work for a company while there are more prefer (ungrammatical "are prefer" is not a valid verb form.) ) to be their own employers. I believe that there are severa

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