Ielts Task 2- please checking my essay, thank you

1. some people think that it is more effectively for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both view and give their own opinion.

Some people believe that students should study collaboratively with others whereas other people believe that it is more effectively for students to study individually.

Studying with a team is better for students because they will have more thorough insight into the issues. If students participate in a study group they will have a chance to discuss the questions, topics or their homework together by listening to the views of others, presenting their own ideas and discussing those ideas until reaching the final answers. This leads to their deeper understanding into the lessons and deepening their knowledge. For example, when addressing a math question, each students can give different answers. They will have to discuss and express their own opinion whether these answers correct or not and support for them. This is a good way for them to understand the question, the answers or even find out their misconceptions ( if any) via their friends' feedback to their answers.

Other people who support students to study on their own can argue that studying alone can assist them to concentrate on studying. They claim that with being alone there is no distraction which may interfere with their concentration, which results in studying more effectively. While if they study with their friends especially with chatterboxes they can be lured into chatting and hanging out instead of studying together. They believe that with the lack of focusing on studying, students ‘performance are likely to be worse.

While this may be true in some circumstances, these problems are not common and consequent. Most students want to have a better result and are serious about study therefore they will study seriously rather than chatting together and distracting each other.

In conclusion, it is better for students to study with a group instead of studying alone, which can help them to simplify understanding