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Do you agree or disagree with the statement that the government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country?

It is argued that government should allocate more money for education of science rather than any other subjects. While I believe that the investment in science teaching is beneficial and vital, I think that it should not be prioritized in comparison with others because each aspect has its own values and meanings.

On the one hand, I agree that the spending on science teaching makes enormous contributions to the country’s growth. Firstly, equipping youngsters with more knowledge about technological science can lead to the inventions of many state-of-the-art devices. Therefore, a nation can become more prosperous and its citizens will lead a more comfortable to live. For example, in Vietnam, a high school student, thanks to what he learned from physic lessons, created the first agrimotor, saving labour for farmers and boosting agricultural productivity. Secondly, I cannot deny the contributions of artificial intelligence taught in some scientific universities which creates robots and programs to replace people in risky tasks such as space exploration or natural energy exploitation.

On the other hand, other subjects are also extremely vital, so government needs to equally invest in its education. For example, language teaching is essential to help students learn and use different languages for international communication. Because we are living in a global village, helping students master other languages can contribute to easier international trade and relationship. Furthermore, civic education, albeit not a science subject, can educate people moral lessons such as sharing or tolerance so that they will grow to be better citizens. As a result, the country can alleviate social evils such as crime, which a is fundamental factor to build a healthy society.

In conclusion, despite the importance and obvious benefits of science education, I believe that government should balance their spending on this subject and others.