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For a long time there has been concern about the quality of the food we eat because of aditives and contaminants. Recently, genetically modified food is becoming more common and is causing concern. is this concern justified or not?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.
Since many years ago, human being was concern about the health so much so that they have changed their diet and have stuck to a healthy diet. But, nowadays, new technologies provide us new organic products with genetically modifications. It is a debate with several strong arguments using these new food.
On the one hand, people who are advocate of modified food argue that new technologies in food industry are very beneficial for our body, because enriched food and fruits with vitamins and other important elements (i.e. iron) are vital for our bodies. The best know example can be nothing but several types of milk with different taste and ingredients in every supermarket. In addition, scientists could decrease the expenses of producing food in new methods and generate more food with some changing in the nature of them. Fir example in very populated countries, like China and India, expenses of creating crops are very high and in these countries new method in genetics can produce more food for them.
On the other hand, other people believe that new generation of food with modification can cause new diseases and scientists are not aware of effects of them in lives. Furthermore, we are witness that many people are concerned about their diet but they are not aware of the type of food that they usually use it and also some companies do not allow customers to know about the process of their products.
To sum up, it is very important that people know more about the type of food that they use on a daily basis and some people are not aware the effects of new products with genetically modifications. In my point of view, I think using of them can cause some problems for our bodies in the future and I prefer to eat food naturally.
Thank you everybody for your comments about my essay.
For a long time there has been concern about the quality of the food we eat because of aditives and contaminants. Recently, genetically modified food is becoming more common and is causing concern. is this concern justified or not?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.
Since many years ago, human being was concern about the health so much so that they have changed their diet and have stuck to a healthy diet. But, nowadays, new technologies provide us new organic products with genetically modifications. It is a debate with several strong arguments using these new food.
On the one hand, people who are advocate of modified food argue that new technologies in food industry are very beneficial for our body, because enriched food and fruits with vitamins and other important elements (i.e. iron) are vital for our bodies. The best know example can be nothing but several types of milk with different taste and ingredients in every supermarket. In addition, scientists could decrease the expenses of producing food in new methods and generate more food with some changing in the nature of them. Fir example in very populated countries, like China and India, expenses of creating crops are very high and in these countries new method in genetics can produce more food for them.
On the other hand, other people believe that new generation of food with modification can cause new diseases and scientists are not aware of effects of them in lives. Furthermore, we are witness that many people are concerned about their diet but they are not aware of the type of food that they usually use it and also some companies do not allow customers to know about the process of their products.
To sum up, it is very important that people know more about the type of food that they use on a daily basis and some people are not aware the effects of new products with genetically modifications. In my point of view, I think using of them can cause some problems for our bodies in the future and I prefer to eat food naturally.
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I agree. I prefer to eat food naturally because process foods are content of preservatives.
- I agree.
- I prefer to eat food naturally because process foods are content of preservatives.
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I agree. I prefer to eat food naturally because process foods are content of preservatives.
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