IELTS TASK 2: advantages and disadvantages

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In many countries, people like to eat a variety of food that is produced in other regions than the food grown

in local areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Even though locally grown foods are both fresher and seasonal, people in today’s world seem to be
reluctant to consume them but prefer imported food. However, benefiting the local job market, this
does pose far more potential risks to people themselves and the community in which they live.
The more consumption of food imported from other places could create more job opportunities locally.
The more demand for imported foods, the more workers will be in need. This is mainly because this
demand opens up a new market where different. employees have to serve consumers from transporting
these foods to selling then to people. As a result, there will be a great deal more unfilled job vacancies
and the unemployed could then find a well-paid job.
However, people’s preference for food Tiyparted from other places will take a heavy toll on their overall
health in the long term. it is well known that the refresher the food is, the healthier it is for people’s
health. Compared with locally earning pot Moores counterparts from far-away states and
countries have to be added some special chemical ingredients to keep them from being rotten as it has
to be traveled a long distance and to stay in the distribution enters before reaching consumers. In this
case, the imported food may not be full of flavor and be detrimental to people’s health, especially for
the older and the children alike.
Consuming more imported foods rather than local food inflicts serious damage to the local economy. If a
the vast majority of local residents buy and eat more food produced in other areas, some of them will be
deprived of work, the only source of family income, and therefore this high unemployment will also
undermine the local economy. What's worse, this consumption pattern will, unfortunately, end up
handling over the earnings to a corporation in another city, state or country to help them boost their
economy, instead of to the local economy.
In conclusion, while proving people with more job choices, this preference for imported food is
dangerous to people’s health as well as the local economy.