IELTS TASK 2 20/07/19

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(TASK 2) The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay:It is true that news coverage in the media is dominated by reports of tragedies, disasters and problems of all kinds. While this may make individuals feel anxious and unhappy, I completely disagree that this is harmful, and the social effects of ignoring such events would be extremely dangerous.Firstly, breaking news is always about some spectacular event. This may be a natural disaster, for example an earthquake, an air crash or a political event such as the assassination of a well-known figure like US President Kennedy or Martin Luther King. Within seconds the news is transmitted around the world. Occasionally, the spectacular event is good news, like the first moon landing. However, most positive developments rarely make front page headlines or appear as leading articles in news reports. Scientific discoveries, such as cures for various types of cancer, are the result of years of methodical investigation and are not considered exciting enough for the sensational journalism of today.Secondly, when something spectacular happens and is instantly reported, this is a necessary step in calling public attention to an issue. The news is distressing for those personally affected, and for society as a whole, but it raises problems which demand public concern. If the media carry a story about a tsunami in Indonesia, this triggers public support to donate money for relief efforts by international organisations. No responsible editorial policy can avoid discussion of the impact of those issues. For instance, a major air crash results in public calls for a safety investigation enquiry, or a nuclear accident raises environmental issues.In conclusion, I do not agree that there is too much media focus on problems and emergencies. Ignoring these issues in favour of a ‘feel good’ approach to the world is dangerous escapism.