Ielts task 2

Some people say that all young people should have full-time education until they are 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that juveniles should stay in full-time education till 18. From my own perspectives, it is vital to have a good education background before entering adult life.

To begin with, some people keep in minds that full-time learning for kids and teenagers can harm their health. It can not be denied that studying in schools sometimes put great pressures on students, which is the underlying cause of mental breakdowns and sleep deprivations. The dominant factor for this issue is that because pupils are usually bombarded with bulks of home-works and exert themselves to study for fear that they may fall behind their studies.

However, there are two main reasons why young schooling's education is necessary. First, during studying in academic schools, students are generally provided with essential skills which enable them to face many hurdles in practical lives. For example, a student who has a good grasp of physics can solve some problems involved in electricity such as replacing a computer'screen or fixing a keyboard.

Additionally, if the government encourage citizens to go to schools at early ages, the rate of illiteracy will be reduced considerably. Besides, most residents will be no longer jobless with fundamental education and the number of manpower will be grew in order to improve the country's advancement for the future.

In conclusion, due to some reasons explaining above, I would strongly believe that everybody should be given more opportunities to be educated well until 18 years old.