IELTS Task 1 - Two maps

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Question: The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.--My report:The maps illustrate the present set up of a university sports centre and its future plan for renovation. Overall, the centre is going to experience significant changes in its structure.  At the present, there main area of the centre consists of a reception at the entrance in the south, an indoor swimming pool in the centre which is surrounded by a gym located in the north east, a changing room in the west, and a seating area in the east. There are also two outdoor courts on two sides of the centre. In the future, the outdoor court in the west side will be demolished to make room for a leisure pool and an additional changing room in the south west of the centre. The other outdoor court in the east side will also be replaced by new facilities, including a sports hall which will be built next to the seating area, two dance studios in the north east, an additional changing room in the south east of the centre. The gym will also be enlarged to the east. Similarly, the size of reception area is going to be increased to incorporate a sports shop in the south west and a café in the south east.206 words--I hope to receive your comments to improve my writing. Thank you in advance!

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Ms.Truc HoOverall, the centre is going to experience significant changes in its structure.

I gave you this advice in an earlier essay, but you did it again in this essay. Is a centre a living creature?

Numbers do not have experiences. Only living creatures see, witness and experience. You can use these verbs anthropomorphically in Task 2, but not in Task 1. Task 1 is science/math and must use unemotional, objective vocabulary.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Since you did not heed my earlier advice, I will only highlight the problem areas.

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The maps illustrate the present set up of a university sports centre and its future plan for renovation. Overall, the centre is going to experience significant changes in its structure.

At the present, there main area of the centre consists of a reception at the entrance in the south, an indoor swimming pool in the centre which is surrounded by a gym located in the north east, a changing room in the west, and a seating area in the east. There are also two outdoor courts on two sides of the centre.

In the future, the outdoor court in the west side will be demolished to make room for a leisure pool and an additional changing room in the south west of the centre. The other outdoor court in the east side will also be replaced by new facilities, including a sports hall which will be built next to the seating area, two dance studios in the north east, an additional changing room in the south east of the centre. The gym will also be enlarged to the east. Similarly, the size of reception area is going to be increased to incorporate a sports shop in the south west and a café in the south east.

IELTS Task 1 - Two maps

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