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The table below shows the in which sector of the economy different age groups were employed.

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The table demonstrates the participation of various age groups in the employment sector.

Overall, while manufacturing was the most popular sector among all age groups, accountancy had the lowest number of attendances. It is also clear that with the notable exception of law, there were slight variations among three age groups in a sector.

People aged from 18-25 mostly took part in retail with 23, which fourfolded the figure of 40-56 age group. Likewise, the highest number of participation of 40-65 age group was recorded in manufacturing with 23; whereas the figure of accountancy was nearly one eighth of that of manufacturing.

In contrast, the figure for attendances of the three age groups was under 10 in accountancy, catering and law. Accountancy, however, was the lowest figure with 2 in 25-40 age group and 3 in the other two age groups. In addition, the number of participation in law of all age groups are equal with 4.


  

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The table below shows the in which sector of the economy different age groups were employed. -------- The table demonstrates the participation of various age groups in the employment sector. (Not a good paraphrase.

  • The table below shows the in which sector of the economy different age groups were employed.
  • -------- The table demonstrates the participation of various age groups in the employment sector.
  • (Not a good paraphrase.
  • ) Model description of this table: The table lists nine specific sectors of the economy and the percentage of people, by three age groups, who were working in that sector.
  • There is a category named "Other" that includes all the unspecified sectors.
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The table below shows the in which sector of the economy different age groups were employed.

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The table demonstrates the participation of various age groups in the employment sector.

(Not a good paraphrase. It is best not to paraphrase at all than to do it badly.)

Model description of this table:
The table lists nine specific
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