IELTS Task 1 - Pie chart. Please check for me [1P_03]
Task 1 - Pie chart - #03
Topic: The pie charts below show the different types of courses, which were followed by the students during the years of 1984, 1994 and 2004.
[This is the clearest image I can find. Please mind that the second and third title are 1994 and 2004 respectively]
The three pie charts compare the percentages of students who took different methods of learning (face-to-face, mixed media, correspondence, and online courses) at three points of time (1984, 1994, and 2004).
Overall, there were only three types of courses in 1984, excluding online learning. Also obvious is that in-person classes still dominated the other types in all three years.
In detail, after initially going into use in 1994, teaching via the Internet had a share of 11% which remained unchanged in the following ten years. Likewise, a stable trend was seen in correspondence courses which attracted a fifth of total students overall.
Moreover, above two-thirds (67%) of all students choosing the face-to-face teaching method, a factor of five compared to correspondence classes and was triple that of mixed-media learning. Albeit undergoing a marginal drop of 13%, this type of education still constituted over half in 2004. Learning with diverse media, on the contrary, slightly increased by 2% to be in the third position in 2004.
Word count: 172 words
Please check this for me. Thank you.
Top answer
Please do not use these bad essay topics. In your diagram there is absolutely no difference between the second and third pie charts, as well as the labels being incorrect and unnatural English Such an example would never be given on an actual IELTS test, so it is useless to use it for practice.
- Please do not use these bad essay topics.
- In your diagram there is absolutely no difference between the second and third pie charts, as well as the labels being incorrect and unnatural English Such an example would never be given on an actual IELTS test, so it is useless to use it for practice.
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Please do not use these bad essay topics.
In your diagram there is absolutely no difference between the second and third pie charts, as well as the labels being incorrect and unnatural English
Such an example would never be given on an actual IELTS test, so it is useless to use it for practice.
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