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Ielts task 1: Map

The pictures illustrate the tentative changes of a building.


Overall, most of rooms in the building will be reconstructed except for stock room. While the four offices will be enlarged in size, there will be no kitchen, canteen and WC.

The size of four offices will be expanded and relocated to the top and bottom of the building. Kitchen, canteen will be demolished to make room for two offices at the top of the buiding. There are two grass areas. One on the left side will be replaced to outdoor activity area. The other will be reconstructed to provide place for a coffee machine, adjacent to stock room at the top of the building and a meeting area in the bottom right hand corner of the building. Reception and entrance will be moved to be in the middle of the two offices at the bottom of the building. Stock room remains unchanged.





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The pictures illustrate the tentative changes to of a building. Overall, most of rooms (wrong phrasing. "most rooms" / "most of the rooms") in the building will be reconstructed except for (missing word) stock room.

  • The pictures illustrate the tentative changes to of a building.
  • Overall, most of rooms (wrong phrasing.
  • "most rooms" / "most of the rooms") in the building will be reconstructed except for (missing word) stock room.
  • While the four offices will be enlarged in size, there will be no kitchen, canteen or and WC.
  • The size of four offices will be expanded and relocated to the top and bottom (The top of a building is the roof.
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The pictures illustrate the tentative changes to of a building.


Overall, most of rooms (wrong phrasing. "most rooms" / "most of the rooms") in the building will be reconstructed except for (missing word) stock room. While

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