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Donut glaze 1688 Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

IELTS Task 1 essay feedback, help me please

Hi everyone, recently I wrote this Task 1 essay, you can find it here: https://ieltsonlinetests.com/wot/result/writing-practice-test-1-472322 (you can find the pictures and topics in this link too)

I wonder if you guys could give me feedback on my writing and also suggestions and constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

Thank you in advance! I greatly appreciate all of your help!

  

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Please post essays, paragraphs, dialogues and other writing in the essay forum so a moderator does not have to move your post. Click on this link:

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