Hi everyone, recently I wrote this Task 1 essay, you can find it here: https://ieltsonlinetests.com/wot/result/writing-practice-test-1-472322 (you can find the pictures and topics in this link too)
I wonder if you guys could give me feedback on my writing and also suggestions and constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!
Thank you in advance! I greatly appreciate all of your help!
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