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Selie Dang Posted 5 years ago
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[IELTS TASK 1] Bar chart - Reality shows & Game shows

The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two bar graphs illustrate the percentage of males and females of varied ages watching reality shows and game shows in Australia.

From both of the charts, it is readily apparent that reality shows are more favorable among women, while the same cannot be said for game programs. Simultaneously, both the two programs draw equal attention from people above 45 years old.

With regards to reality programs, there is an enormous discrepancy of 34% between men and women. The shows are most popular among people aged 45 or older, being just under 69%. Next come the 35-44 and 25-34 groups, with 65% and 60% in turn. Although half of the youngest group opt for this form of entertainment, they make up the smallest portion compared to the others.

Conversely, the number of males watching game shows exceed that of their female counterparts, although with a modest disparity of 2%. The figure for the 45+ group being 70% nearly doubles that for the 25-34 group. These programs are less favored by adults from 35 to 44, with around 38% as opposed to 50% of the respondents aged between 16 and 24.


Word count: 190


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The given bar charts illustrate the percentages of males and females of varied various ages brackets watching in Australia who watch reality TV shows and

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