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Car banana 513 Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

IELTS TASK 1 - BAR CHART

The bar chart compares the average amount of hours per day that Greece's foreign visitors from China, America, Turkey, and Brazil spend doing different activities in August 2015.

It is clear that Chinese tourists spend more time reading books than doing any other daily activity. Also, the time spent by American, Turkish, Brazilian and Chinese travelers on exploring new places in Greece was the lowest than the other.

It is noticeable that the number of hours each day spent on staying at the beach to enjoy the holiday of all tourists from the four countries mentioned increased steadily. Chinese visitors spent 3 hours at the beach per day on their holiday in Greece, less 1 hour than USA people and compared to 5 and 6 hours travelers from Tukey and Brazil have for their vacation in Greece respectively.

Chinese tourists spent 8 hours per day to reading book while enjoying their break in Greece double than the figure for Turkey and Brazil, which recorded 4 hours in each. The time for United State people having a vacation in the same place to do the same thing was more than 1 hour. Also, both American tourists and Turkish tourists spent 3 hours per day to find new places in Greece, compared to 2 and 1 hours in Brazillian and Chinese travelers respectively.


Can you give me exactly what score I get from my performance? Thank you.

  

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The bar chart compares the average amount of hours per day that Greece's foreign visitors (That is a very awkward expression. It is grammatical, but unnatural.) from China, America, Turkey, and Brazil spend (wrong tense) doing different activities (What activities? How many?) in

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