task 1: Question: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
My writing
Dear Lucy,
I am so sorry for the noise that was from my house last night. That's because my son's school talent competition is coming next weekend and he has to pratice until it happens. He decided to sing the song called " All by myself" in front of the examiners and the audiences. You know that this song contains most of the high notes, so he has to use all of his throat's strength to sing it properly. Therefore, he created a loud noise that negatively affected some of the neighbors around us, including you. One more time, I feel sorry about this terrible things. hope you can sympathize to my son because he tried so hard to practice and practice again with the goal is winning the competition and making his family and friends feel proud of him. I know this is difficult but I hope so.
To prevent the noise spreading too far and to narrow it down, my husband and I made up our mind to buy soundproofed walls and attach them in our house as soon as we can. We booked them online, so we have to wait until it is delivered. During this time, I hope you can be kind to him because I know you are a gentle and generous woman. On the other hand, we will attempt to control the noise to limit its horrible impacts to our neighborhood.
Thank you,
Your neighbor,
Hayley
Task 2: Question:
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
My writing:
No one has the same opinion about advertising: some of them thinks that advertising motivates us to buy things that we really are not required. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may upgrade our lives. However, I choose to be in the second team-the benefits of advertising.
First of all, you can get the newest and most beneficial products by advertisements. You can see that nowadays, most of the time we open the television, we absolutely see the advertisements from many different brands are being showed. Or sometimes, when we are hanging out on the road, I have to insist that some shops' advertisements will definitely catch your eyes by different ways, so many people will pay attetion to them, including you. Do you know that what the point of these actions is. They want to encourage us to buy their products with the latest functions. Most of the products they sell for us are the most advanced goods. Therefore, this can improve your life in the best ways. For example, if there are two types of cookies you want to try, you absolutely choose the one which has the better evaluation from the customers or the amount that has been sold. This means the more people buy it, the more beneficial it gives us.
Another positive aspect of it is the cheap prices. Therefore, when you buy the things you see from the advertisments, you can get them with the reasonable prices, sometimes, cheaper than the market. The products are not only fantastic, but also not expensive, so don't hesitate aymore to buy them. The productor wants to make their products become the best seller, so they must arrow the prices down.
These are the reasons why advertisements are actually wonderful for us.
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Please do not put two essays in on
You wrote over 240 words. The minimum is 150. You will not lose points for writing a long response; however long essays generally do not score well.
You will lose point for every mistake, and you can make more mistakes in a long post compared to a short one.
Dear Lucy,
I am so sorry for the noise that was from my house last night. That's because my son's