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Ielts task 1

The line chart illustrates the figure of peoples those migrating from rural to urban areas in three different countries: Iran, Indonesia, Russia from 2000 to 2025. Overall, there was an increase tend in the number of people moving to city in periods

From 2000 to 2015, the proportion of individuals in Russia was the highest number at the beginning, being about 20 million, increasing significantly to 70 million. The next decade, Russia's figure was a slight growth , reaching around 90 million. However, these was a huge distinction in the figure of two countries, Indonesia and Iran. There was a similar figure in resident in both countries between 2000 and 2005, being around 10 million. However, while Iran’s the number has a rapid rise over 20 years later, being nearly 100 million and also being the highest figure in among three countries, Indonesia’s the number grow slightly to 30 million, being 70 million and 60 million lower than that of Iran and Russia respectively.

To sum up, while all three countries have seen a rose to 2015, only the figure for countries Russia and Iran are continue to grow up in 2025

  

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