IELTS Task 1

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Task 1: The table below gives information about the values of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.

The given table sets out New Zealand's expenditures of tradings of kiwi from 2010 - 2012 in term of the New Zealand dollar.

From an overall perspective, while four out of five countries got their exportation's prices raised, costs for Saudi Arabia enjoy an astounding downturn trend.

In 2010, New Zealand paid the most for exporting the fruit to Japan by up to 271 million dollars, tripling China's value of exportation of 74 million dollars, vastly outnumbering the figure for Mexico of 1.2 million dollars. Over the period, trading values to Japan and China steadily upswings to their highest growth of 325 and 94 million dollars respectively in 2012. Mexico, with only 1.2 million dollars cost for tradings in 2010, thrived to 3.3 million dollars in 2012

On the other hand, the expenses of exports from New Zealand to Saudi Arab and Russia valued 29 million dollars and 968 thousand dollars sequentially in 2010. Though Russia had its cost the lowest in the meantime, the statistics went up to 2.404 million dollars in 2012. Saudi Arabia, on an opposite pattern, had its expenses from New Zealand dramatically low on shipping kiwis, from 29 million dollars in 2010, it dropped hard to 106 thousand dollars in 2011 and a slight decrease to 82 thousand dollars in 2012.