IELTS task 1
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Task1
The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts inform us about what Australian student chose to do after graduating in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
Overall, there is a steady growth in the proportion of those who were employed immediately after high school in, while the number of those who pursue higher levels of education is declined from 50% in 1980 to only 37% in 2000. The unemployment rate didn't change significantly during this period.
The reason for this changes was probably the increased tuition fees.
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The charts show what Australian school graduates did immediately after leaving secondary school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. ) chose to do after graduating in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
- The charts show what Australian school graduates did immediately after leaving secondary school.
- Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
- ) chose to do after graduating in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
- Overall, there is a steady growth in the proportion of those who were employed immediately after high school in, while the number (improper usage) of those who pursue higher levels of education is declined from 50% in 1980 to only 37% in 2000.
- The unemployment rate (Improper usage.
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The charts show what Australian school graduates did immediately after leaving secondary school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts inform us about what Australian
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