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The line graph compares four food: fish, lamb, beef and chicken in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
It is clear that the consumption of fish, beef and lamb in a European considerably in 25 year.
In 1979, the beef has the most consumption about 220 grams per person week, which more triple te fish and three over two the lamb. Specially, about three year later, the beef and the lamb was dramatic decrease. Then, yhe beef was fast growth about 240 grams. Next, the beef and the lamb droped about 60% lower than the original. Conversely, the fish has fluture around 50 grams. It only slight decrease was seen in the 2004.
Besider, in 1979, chicken has the consumption about 140 grams, nearly the lamb, which has 150 grams. Then, it dramatic creased in the 2004 with the 250 grams. The chicken has the highest consumption compared to fish, beef and lamb
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There are many issues with your description of the graph. The sentences are quite poor. Be sure your sentence or clause has a subject and a verb.
- There are many issues with your description of the graph.
- The sentences are quite poor.
- Be sure your sentence or clause has a subject and a verb.
- The subject and verb must agree.
- Write very short sentences and then you will do better.
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There are many issues with your description of the graph. The sentences are quite poor. Be sure your sentence or clause has a subject and a verb. The subject and verb must agree. Write very short sentences and then you will do better.
We do not use the definite article (the) with meat like beef, pork, lamb and fish.
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