I prepared the following talk on the topic of appearance as pratice for the speaking component of the IELTS test. Could anyone help me check it and make it more natural, please? 1. Describe a girl She is absolutely gorgeous. She has shouder-length, jet-black hair. What impressed me most is her face. she's got a round face with an upturned nose, PALE BLUE EYES and a radiant complexion. I feel that she's like a model. People always compliment her ON her hourglass figure. She actually bears a striking resemblance to a famous singer. |
2. Describe a boy He has an square face and a ruddy complexion. He stands out with his FACIAL HAIR. He SPORTS a thick mustache and bushy eyebrows. His body isn't bad. He has an athletic build with broad shouders and muscular arms. |
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Here is my recording:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B_1FcIJMzfDZNXU0SGVwSTB5bVE
doanxuanquyHe hasana square face
doanxuanquyHis body isn't bad.
That doesn't sound very natural.
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Audio:
Hello everyone [eveyone],
My name is Gui,