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Persian Learner Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

IELTS Speaking Part II

Hi.

Talk about a holiday you have taken recently or at some time in the past.

You should include in your answer:

  • Where you went on your holiday
  • Why you went to this particular place
  • What you did and with whom
  • and whether you enjoyed your holiday or not

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I'm an outdoor type and it is very fascinating for me to remember my holidays. The place I want to talk about is a village located in the north of Iran. Since the place is located near the sea it is very humid and it is because of the humidity that you can find lots of trees and plants growing wildly in the place.

Well, as I said, the village has so many trees and as a matter of fact the weather there is very clean. Oh, and it is not just the weather that persuaded me to visit the place, in fact the village is so peaceful that when you arrive in the city, you can hardly believe there are people in that area. It is also worth mentioning that since the weather was very nice we could see many picturesque places.

I said picturesque, well, I remember the very small waterfall we came across once which was a unique experience for me. I visited the place to revitalize myself and I am so glad that it turned out to be so. One of the interesting points of this holiday was that I was not alone. Actually I was with my best friend who helped me find the place. I remember before going on this exciting holiday we started to gather information to see if we could find suitable place that we could both enjoy. Together we went fishing and swimming and I really happy that he enjoyed this holiday too. Oh, I also read a few fascinating short stories too which indeed added to the pleasure of the holiday.

All in all, I enjoyed a lot and I guess mu friend did too because in the end, we were very invigorated and I think that is what most people crave for.

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Is the answer grammatical, natural and to the point? Could you think of a change which made it better/more natural?

  

Top answer

Persian Learner lots of trees and plants Trees are plants. Therefore, it would be logical to write: lots of trees and other plants. Persian Learner growing wildly in the place.

  • Persian Learner lots of trees and plants Trees are plants.
  • Therefore, it would be logical to write: lots of trees and other plants.
  • Persian Learner growing wildly in the place.
  • This is understandable but clumsy.
  • It would be simpler as: growing wild there .
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Persian Learnerlots of trees and plants

Trees are plants. Therefore, it would be logical to write: lots of trees and other plants.

Persian Learnergrowing wildly in the place.

This is understandable but clumsy. It would be simpler as: growing wild there.

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