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The chart shows the percentage of people in different age groups (namely 18-34, 35-54, and over 55) encountering three different problems when they are living abroad.
Overall, the major obstacle for the over-55s is language, while accommodation is a real struggle for people between the ages of 35 and 54. However, the greatest difficulty for those in the younger age group is making new friends.
Over 50% of people over 55 find it most difficult to learn the local language in foreign countries, while this is the least common problem for the other groups, with nearly one in three people facing this problem. Meanwhile, a similar proportion of the over-55s (just over 20%) have to deal with problems, namely making friends and finding accommodation.
For people aged 18 to 34, nearly half of them have difficulty striking up a friendship, while finding accommodation is a challenge for approximately 40% in the two younger age groups.
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The chart shows the percentage of people in different age groups (namely 18-34, 35-54, and over 55) encountering three different problems when they are living abroad. (That is misleading. ) Overall, The major obstacle for the over-55s is language, while accommodation is a real struggle for people between the ages of 35 and 54.
- The chart shows the percentage of people in different age groups (namely 18-34, 35-54, and over 55) encountering three different problems when they are living abroad.
- (That is misleading.
- ) Overall, The major obstacle for the over-55s is language, while accommodation is a real struggle for people between the ages of 35 and 54.
- However, And the greatest difficulty for those in the younger age group is making new friends.
- Over 50% of people over 55 find it most difficult to learn the local language in foreign countries, while this is the least common problem for the other groups, with nearly one in three people facing this problem.
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The chart shows the percentage of people in different age groups (namely 18-34, 35-54, and over 55) encountering three different problems when they are living abroad. (That is misleading. They are not just living abroad; they have left their country of birth to take up permanent residence in a different country.)
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