(IELTS) Help Me to check my Complain Letter
00 could u help me please to check my english grammar ? 02 br
00 I have one complain letter for IELTS test. 02 br
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00 I really appreciated for your help 02 br
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00 Dear Sport Club Manager: 02 br
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00 I am writing this letter to have an enquiries regards with sport club membership. First of all I would like to introduce my self. I am a college student of Sydney University. In addition, I got a reference from my classmate in the university that your sport club has many facilities and kinds of sport equipments. Last week, when I surveyed your sport club place facilities. My first impression was very good and feel convenience. There are three reasons. First, sport club location is strategic, close to the city and campus. I do not have any difficulties to go there. Second, your sport club has many kinds of sport equipment and facilities such as treadmill and a large swimming pool. Furthermore, you keep toilet and swimming pool to be always clean and sterile.Third, you have fitness tutors who are very helpful and friendly to help all the member. 02 br
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00 I have some enquiries as the following bellows : 02 br
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00 · 00 00 How much does the registration of membership fee ? 02 br
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00 · 00 00 How much does the monthly membership fee ? 02 br
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00 · 00 00 What are the required document for membership registration ? 02 br
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00 · 00 00 What are the sport packages that you have ? 02 br
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00 I am waiting your reply. I am expecting you will give me the complete information. 02 br
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00 I really appreciate for your assistance. 02 br
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00 Regards, 02 br
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02 br 01 b 01 i 00 I have stricken out inappropriate portions and underlined some problem areas: 02 br 02 i 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 Dear Sport Club Manager: 02 br 02 br 00 I am writing this letter to 01 u 00 have an enquiries 02 u 00 01 u 00 regards with 02 u 00 sport club membership. 02 del 00 I am a 01 del 00 college 02 del 00 student 01 u 00 of 02 u 00 Sydney University. 01 del 00 In addition, 02 del 00 I 01 u 00 got 02 u 00 a reference from 01 u 00 my 02 u 00 classmate 01 del 00 in the university 02 del 00 01 u 00 that 02 u 00 your sport club has many facilities and kinds of 01 u 00 sport equipments 02 u 00 .
- 02 br 01 b 01 i 00 I have stricken out inappropriate portions and underlined some problem areas: 02 br 02 i 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 Dear Sport Club Manager: 02 br 02 br 00 I am writing this letter to 01 u 00 have an enquiries 02 u 00 01 u 00 regards with 02 u 00 sport club membership.
- 02 del 00 I am a 01 del 00 college 02 del 00 student 01 u 00 of 02 u 00 Sydney University.
- 01 del 00 In addition, 02 del 00 I 01 u 00 got 02 u 00 a reference from 01 u 00 my 02 u 00 classmate 01 del 00 in the university 02 del 00 01 u 00 that 02 u 00 your sport club has many facilities and kinds of 01 u 00 sport equipments 02 u 00 .
- Last week, when I 01 u 00 surveyed 02 u 00 your 01 del 00 sport club place 02 del 00 01 u 00 facilities.
- My 02 u 00 first impression was very good 01 u 00 and feel convenience 02 u 00 .
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01 b 01 i 00 I have stricken out inappropriate portions and underlined some problem areas: 02 br
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00 Dear Sport Club Manager: 02 br
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00 I am writing this letter to 01 u 00 have an enquiries 02 u 00 01 u 00 regards with 02 u 00 sport club membership. 01 del
0I am a college student from Sydney University and one of my classmate (John William) have referred me about your Sports Club. I am writing with regards to enquire about memberships offered.
Last week, I visited your sports club and it had left a very good impression on me. I also found various other reasons to join your club, which are from club location to its eq
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