IELTS General WRITING TASK 1- please kindly help to review my letter

Dear Teachers,

Could you please help to check my Letter as below

Thank you so much for your kind support.

WRITING TASK 1 (A LETTER)

Write a letter to a friend who invited you to meet up but you missed the appointment.
Apologise for not messaging
Explain why you could not go
Suggest another date

Dear Laura,

I’m so happy when I received your housewarming invitation in this weekend. It’s so excited to hear that now your dream really come true. And I know your house will be such a beauty house with many flowers as you told me before.

But, I am afraid I have to say apologize to you that I can’t come to join with your happy together. I am having a business trip in another country and maybe cannot come back in this week. What a pity and I’m really sorry about that and hopefully get your understanding.

How do you feel about the lovely handmade embroidery? Yeah, this is exactly that I figured out in this city and its will be suitable with your house. So, May I bring it to you when I come back in next 2 weeks later?

Congratulation to you and can’t wait to visit your house.

Jessica