[IELTS] General Writing Task 1: Letter to a friend

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Give details of your study plans
- Explain why you want to get a part-time job
- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Jason,

It's been a while since the graduation dinner last year.
How are you? how's your life in London?

Here's a good news i would like to share with you:
In this October, I'm going to study the master degree course of design in London University.
It's exciting to me for taking this challenge and live in Britain for more than 2 years, especially around you.

As I almost spent all my savings on the school fee and flight ticket, I really need to get a part-time job in London for living. I wonder if you could help me a bit about it.

I am not familiar on the job market over there, say, wages & working hours.
Would you please help me to find a job like kitchen helper in cafe or fast food shop.
Please don't forget to ask the employer to leave me an email address so i can reach them through internet.

Counting on you, mate.
See you in summer.

PS: Better filled the refrigerator with beer before my arrival.

Cheers,
Ericsson

nitpicking is welcome.

thank you for your help.

2 days to go.