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Hi everyone, I hope everybody is doing great, I wanted to post in this forum since I needed a bit of help with my writing task for the IELTS, it would be very grateful if somebody could comment on all the aspects that I need to improve and tell me at what am I aiming, since I'm preparing for this test independently.
The line graph provides information based on the average amount of monthly temperatures emitted by the sun, and the average period of annual hours of sunshine obtained in the cities of London, New York, and Sydney.
Overall, we can observe that the cities of New York and London have decreased significantly after a few months period of time, and on the other hand Sydney has developed a constant increase during the end of the year.
Analysing the graph, we can notice that since the beginning of January the city of London started with a temperature of around 9 degrees and New York with lower than 5 degrees. Both cities have increased constantly during the spring and summer season. Nonetheless, until the period of July New York reached a temperature of almost 30 degrees whilst London had 6 degrees less than New York. Previous from that time they suffered a total decrease on his weathercast, ending with the same values as they had on the beginning of the graph.
On the aspect of Sydney, it started with 26 degrees and kept constant for 2 more months. Until April it decreased dramatically up to the month of July. Apart from the beginning of autumn the temperature recovered and started to increase again over the months of December.
We can analyze that between New York and Sydney both have almost an equal amount of annual hours of sunshine, while London had the least between the rest of the cities.
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- The best thing you can do when studying independently is to practice as many essays as possible.
- Here is a site with many topic questions for both Task 1 and Task 2.
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