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First, factors that affect a child vary but the most outstanding one may be the emergence of technological devices. With a click of a button, they can access to public websites or social networking such as F, I. There are number of videos, short films and musics which be shown on the sites and may be they watch and imitate the characters

  

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anonymous they can access to public w ebsites or anonymous they can gain access to public websites ------------------------------------------ anonymous or social networking platforms such as F acebook or I nstagram . ----------------------------------------- anonymous There are number of videos, short films and musics which be shown on the sites and may be they watch and imitate the characters That sentence is ungrammatical, and the intended meaning is unclear. Rewrite it.

  • anonymous they can access to public w ebsites or anonymous they can gain access to public websites ------------------------------------------ anonymous or social networking platforms such as F acebook or I nstagram .
  • ----------------------------------------- anonymous There are number of videos, short films and musics which be shown on the sites and may be they watch and imitate the characters That sentence is ungrammatical, and the intended meaning is unclear.
  • Rewrite it.
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anonymousthey can access to public websites

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anonymousthey can gain access to public websites

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anonymousor social networking

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