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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of books which were sold in Denmark from 1972 to 2012.
Overall, the proportion of adult fiction books saw the biggest change, while the opposite was true for children’s fiction books. In addition, the biography books were usually the least popular.
In 1972, the figures for adult fiction and children fiction books stood at 20%, before both increased to around 25% in 1992. There was a slight rise in children’s fiction books to 25% in 2012. Meanwhile, adult fiction books experienced a significant increase to 45% in 2012.
There was a gradual fall in the sale of biography books, from 20% in 1972 to 8% in 2012. The proportion of travel books started at 15% in 1972 and increased to 18% in 1992, before dropping to 10% in 2012. In addition, the figure for other books decreased dramatically, from 25% in 1972 to 12% in 2012.
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- Please read my advice for Task 1 essays.
- It covers the vocabulary words that you have improperly used: illustrate see (numbers cannot see anything!
- ) IELTS TASK 1: Hints, Tips And Advice Vocabulary Words For Task 1: Reference Post
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