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The chart shows the number of three different products (games software, CDs, and DVDs or videos) which were sold in the world in four years, from 2000 to 2003.
Overall, DVD/video sales had the greatest change, while the opposite was true for CDs. In addition, the sales of CDs was the highest during the period.
In 2000, the sales of games software started at 12 billion dollars, which was the least popular among the three products. And then there was a sharp increase in games software sales to 17 billion dollars in 2002. The figure for games software remained stable at 17 billion dollars between 2002 and 2003.
The number of CDs sales stood at 34 billion dollars in 2000, which was the highest point, before dropping minimally to 32 billion dollars in 2002. There was a slight increase in the sales of CDs to 33 billion dollars in 2003. In addition, the proportion of DVD/video sales had a significant rise from 17 billion dollars in 2000 to around 30 billion dollars in 2003.
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The (What kind of chart? ) chart shows the number (wrong word) of three different products (not good. ) (games software, CDs, and DVDs or videos) which were sold in the world in four years, from 2000 to 2003.
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- ) chart shows the number (wrong word) of three different products (not good.
- ) (games software, CDs, and DVDs or videos) which were sold in the world in four years, from 2000 to 2003.
- Overall, DVD/video sales had the greatest change, while the opposite was true for CDs.
- In addition, the amount of money from sales of CD s (incorrect) was the highest during the period .
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