IELST task 1- Table, please check it

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The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The table reveals the average turnovers of three different outlets in Vancouver in the year 2016. It mentions 3 outlets which located in Georgia Street, Dunsmuir Street and Drake Street.Overview, branch in Georgia street is the most successful with the highest indicators of each transaction whereas the number of that in Drake Street is the lowest among all outlets.According to Georgia street, Total deals was 854 with 405 for Eat-in and 449 for Take-away. In comparison with Drake Street, which is lower two times than that in each category, except transaction value. In particular, Transaction value in Drake Street is 9.02$, lower by 1.67$ than that of Georgia Street. Besides, there were 390 total deals which included 200 deals for eat-in and 190 deals for take-away.In Dunsmuir Street, just 5.61$ for each Transaction while its total deals were 750, namely, 358 transactions and 392 transactions for eat-in and take-way respectively. Moreover, Chicken Wing is the most popular food in there while outlet in Georgia and Drake Street had a different cuisine of chicken - chicken burger and chicken pasta respectively which were their best seller.

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The table reveals the average turnovers (incorrect word. ) of three different outlets in Vancouver in the year 2016. It mentions 3 (repetitious. Also, the reader has no idea that these outlets serve food. They could sell T-Shirts or sunglasses. Turnover, a non-count noun, is a measure of how frequently the entire stock is sold and replaced by new stock. In the context of a restaurant, it means how often a particular seat is vacated and taken by a new customer. There are no numbers representing turnover in the table.) outlets which located in on Georgia Street, Dunsmuir Street and Drake Street. (You missed the four different measures that are in the table. Your first paragraph is incomplete and inadequate. )

The table contains sales data and other information for three branches of a Vancouver restaurant chain, namely, Georgia Street, Dunsmuir Street and Drake Street. There are two main indicators of sales: the number of transactions, and their average value in dollars. The number of transactions is further subdivided into two categories, eat-in and take-away. The table also lists the most popular menu item in each location.

~~Overview~~, Overall, the branch in Georgia street is the most successful with the highest values for each indicator~~s of each transaction~~ whereas the number (wrong form, there is more than one) ~~of that in~~ Drake Street is the lowest among all outlets.

Suggestion for the "overview" paragraph.

Overall, the Georgia Street location was the most successful, with an income of $9,129, compared to $4,207 for Dunsmuir Street and $3,518 for Drake Street. Georgia Street takes in two and a half times more money than Drake Street. There were more take-away sales compared to eat-in sales at Georgia Street and Dunsmuir; the opposite was true for Drake Street. Also, no one menu item was popular among all locations. Each location had its own best seller.

According to (wrong phrase. ) Georgia street, Total deals (wrong word. A deal is a bargain or a major sale that requires a contract negotiation. ) was (wrong form) 854 with 405 for Eat-in and 449 for Take-away. In comparison with Drake Street, which is lower two times than that in each category, (What are the categories? You have not mentioned them.) except transaction value. (Fragment, incomplete sentence.) In particular, (missing words) Transaction value in Drake Street is 9.02lt;/span>, lower by 1.67$ than that of Georgia Street. Besides, there were 390 total deals which included 200 deals for eat-in and 190 deals for take-away.

In Dunsmuir Street, just 5.61lt;/span> for each Transaction while its total deals were 750, namely, 358 transactions and 392 transactions for eat-in and take-way respectively. Moreover, Chicken Wing (wrong form) is the most popular food in there while outlet in Georgia and Drake Street had a different cuisine (Incorrect. There is nothing in the table that tells us that they had different styles of food. You could make the conclusion that these were chicken restaurants, but don't draw any conclusions in Task 1.) of chicken - chicken burger and chicken pasta respectively which were their best seller. (wrong form)

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