IELFs Wiriting task I

The table shows the figure of visitors who came to Ashdown Museum before and after being modernised. The pie chart illustrates the percentage of satisfaction of the visitors during the same two periods.

Overall, it is clear that the proportion of visitors increased after the upgrade of the museum. Besides, the number of people who feel happy about the museum went up, too.

Before renovation, the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum was 74,000. However, nearly a half of them feel dissatisfied and the percentage of people who was dissatisfied is also quite significant, 30%. There is only 35% of total number of visitors like and very like the museum without the renewal.

Compared to the figure before the refurbishment, the visitors figure who came to Ashdown Museum after the upgrade is much higher. Also, in this year, the people feeling dissatisfied and very dissatisfied were lower, 15%, 5% respectively. There is a sharp increase of the people who please with the museum's refurbishment. The percentage of 92,000 visitors satisfied is 40% and very satisfied about Ashdown Museum after the modernisation is 35%.