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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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How can this sentence be rewritten to remove redundant words/phrases?
Computer-generated images of faces are manipulated and changed by researchers, and the reactions of viewers to the images are measured.
Computer-generated images of faces are manipulated and changed by researchers, and the reactions of viewers to the images are measured.
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Hi. I would say; Computer images of faces are manipulated , and Viewers' reactions are measured. Regards
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- I would say; Computer images of faces are manipulated , and Viewers' reactions are measured.
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Hi.
I would say;
Computer images of faces are manipulated , and Viewers' reactions are measured.
Regards
I would say;
Computer images of faces are manipulated , and Viewers' reactions are measured.
Regards
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Possibly,
Researchers alter computer-generated images of faces and measure viewers' reactions.
CJ
Researchers alter computer-generated images of faces and measure viewers' reactions.
CJ
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