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Kamlesh12 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Identifing Mistake!

Hello All,

Below is a mail which i want to send to my senior about the status of my sales call. Kindly correct me if there is any mistake.

He said our management had decided that we wouldn't change our existing payroll vendor.he will let us know whenever they want to change the vendor.

Kamlesh
  

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Almost perfect! He said our management had decided that we wouldn't change our current payroll vendor. He will let us know whenever they decide to change the vendor.

  • Almost perfect!
  • He said our management had decided that we wouldn't change our current payroll vendor.
  • He will let us know whenever they decide to change the vendor.
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Almost perfect!

He said our management had decided that we wouldn't change our current payroll vendor. He will let us know whenever they decide to change the vendor.
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Thanks a lot for your reply!

Its help me to identify and use proper words as per the sentence meaning.

kamlesh

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