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Beopro Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Ideal

1. My ideal parent would be someone who has to take me as I am. Except for suggesting things that I can improve upon and pointing out what I am doing wrong.

- Are these two sentences perfect for written English?

Thank you very much, Teachers

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Dear Teachers, - Are the two sentences above ok for written English? Thank you very much Beopro

  • Dear Teachers, - Are the two sentences above ok for written English?
  • Thank you very much Beopro
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Dear Teachers,
- Are the two sentences above ok for written English?

Thank you very much

Beopro
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Hi,
The second one is not a sentence; it is a sentence fragment.

My ideal parent would be someone who would accept me as I am. Nonetheless, I value my independence, and I
would not want my parent to tell me what I do wrong or expect me to improve upon the achievements I already had.

Written English is more demanding, and we have to pay attention to correct grammar whil

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