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Stephan Kloss 8990 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

idea being

It was the adventure aspect together with the idea being on a team that was most attractive to her.
Can I use his structure or do I have to use idea of being?
  

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Your sentence has problems. It was the adventure together with the idea of being on a team that was most attractive to her . Now it's OK.

— Mister Micawber

  • Your sentence has problems.
  • It was the adventure together with the idea of being on a team that was most attractive to her .
  • Now it's OK.
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Your sentence has problems.

It was the adventure together with the idea of being on a team that was most attractive to her.

Now it's OK.
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What do you mean with adventure and of in bold? Does the preposition of belong to the word adventure and not to the word idea?
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The bold highlights the areas I have corrected. The sentence is now correct. ('Aspect' was unnecessary and awkward; 'of' is a necessary addition.)
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