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Nicetomeetyou Posted 3 years ago
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I’d really appreciate your help.

I’ve checked this paragraph myself, but I would really like to know whether it’s natural and flows well.

Being a good student is more than just being able to focus on their studies. Actually, there is so much they can learn from extracurricular activities. For example, joining club activities can not only make their school life richer but also help them develop communication skills. I believe that learning how to get along and work cooperatively with other students will be helpful in many ways once they get out into the real world.

  

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Do you have two accounts that you are posting from? There is another paragraph on exactly this topic from the same IP address.

  • Do you have two accounts that you are posting from?
  • There is another paragraph on exactly this topic from the same IP address.
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Do you have two accounts that you are posting from? There is another paragraph on exactly this topic from the same IP address.

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Being a good student is more than just being able to focus on their studies. (There is no good transition to the next idea.) They not only pay studious attention to the lessons in the classroom, but they have many hobbies after school with their friends. Actually, there is so much they can learn from extracurricula

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