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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
I'd really appreciate if you could check this paragraph.
You don't write a diary to show it to someone else. If there were a reader, it would be the very person who writes it. Therefore, there is absolutely no need to think about your reader. All you have to do is just write as you like. In contrast, when you write a letter or a postcard, you always have a particular reader. Every time you write, you have a different writer. That's why you have to write the way you write depending on who you are writing to.
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I think your instructions are too wordy, which may confuse the student unnecessarily. You don't write a diary to show it to someone else; its only reader is the person who writes it. Therefore, you can just write as you like.
- I think your instructions are too wordy, which may confuse the student unnecessarily.
- You don't write a diary to show it to someone else; its only reader is the person who writes it.
- Therefore, you can just write as you like.
- In contrast, when you write a letter or a story, you have a different reader, so you have to write in a way that depends on who you are writing to.
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I think your instructions are too wordy, which may confuse the student unnecessarily.
You don't write a diary to show it to someone else; its only reader is the person who writes it. Therefore, you can just write as you like. In contrast, when you write a letter or a story, you have a different reader, so you have to write in a way that depends on who you are writing to.
You don't write a diary to show it to someone else; its only reader is the person who writes it. Therefore, you can just write as you like. In contrast, when you write a letter or a story, you have a different reader, so you have to write in a way that depends on who you are writing to.
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Sorry, the last sentence needs a change. write the way?change the way
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Ah, how I wish I could write like you!!!
Thank you very much for your great paragraph:) Do you think if I keep writing, there is a slight chance that I can write as well as you?
Thank you very much for your great paragraph:) Do you think if I keep writing, there is a slight chance that I can write as well as you?
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