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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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I'd love to have critics on my cv.

0Hello, could you tell me what's missing, or exagerated on this cv?02br
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00Thanks a lot!02br
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00Personal information listed here, phone, email, address and name02br
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00Information Technology Analyst02br
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00Analyst Developer02br
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00OOP Certification02br
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00EXperience02br
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01b002006 - 200802b02br
01b00Web Developer02b02br
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01u00Company Name 02u01a00www.xxx.com02a02br
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00Working for xxx has been a great opportunity for me. I have been part of the development of a ticket sales system that required me to learn new .Net technologies and concepts. I also worked alone on smaller projects and had the opportunity to be in direct contact with the customers.02br
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00I started working in a project with thirty developers for a healthcare company (other company name), our responsibility was to migrate their old system from the framework 1.1 to 2.0. I also have been in maintenance for a while working in projects for xxx and xxx2.02br
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01u00Company name 02u01a01font00www.xxx.com02font02a02br
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00My primary role was to computerize some internal areas of the company. I also supported some help to the employees with all sort of problems they could have.02br
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00SPOKEN LANGUAGES02br
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02td00English, French, Italian, Spanish02td
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00Microsoft Certified Professional02br
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02br 02br 00From 2005-2006: I started working ON a project02br 02br 00After writing the year leave a space before writing02br 02br 00Your skills are very complicated for someone who doesn't know about computer systems0-

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0From 2006-2008, give more details about the development of the ticket sales system for employers to know what is it and how it works and what you did really.02br
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00From 2005-2006: I started working ON a project02br
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00After writing the year leave a space before writing02br
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00Your skills are very complicated for someone wh
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0Only that? I tought there were more mistakes, but thanks a lot then!0-
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0Hi,02br
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00You need to re-organize it overall.02br
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00Follow your personal info with an OBJECTIVES section, stating what job you are applying for. eg Dishwasher? eg Company president?02br
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00Then follow with 02br
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00SKILLS02br
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00EMPLOYMENT EXPERIENCE put the details in point
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0Thanks a lot for the feedback!0-

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