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Park sang joon Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

I'd like to check with you whether my examples are right

1) I heard of a man critical of what you have written.
2) I saw a man capable of lifting a truck.
3) I met a man confident of flying a kite.
4) I appeased my daughter bored of reading books.
5) I promised my daughter scared of an injection that I will buy ice cream for her after the treatment.
6) I bought a figure for my son interested in Super Man.
7) I was happy looking at my daughter surprised at a sudden present.

I'd like to check with you whether my examples are right, especially the phrases in bold.

Thank you in advance for your help.
  

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Topic-off, How do you usually cut off in relative clauses sentence? For example, I see that what you're actually trying to do is improve the contrast in blah~ blah~.

  • Topic-off, How do you usually cut off in relative clauses sentence?
  • For example, I see that what you're actually trying to do is improve the contrast in blah~ blah~.
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Topic-off, How do you usually cut off in relative clauses sentence?
For example, I see that what you're actually trying to do is improve the contrast in blah~ blah~.
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The following are okay:

1. I heard of a man who is critical of what you have written. (Who is is needed.)

2. I saw a man capable of lifting a truck. (Original sentence is okay.)

3. I met a man who was confident of flying a kite. (Who was is needed.)

4. I appeased my daughter who was bored with reading books. (Who was is needed. Bored with instead of of.
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We usually omit the objective relative pronouns like which, whom, or that.
We sometimes omit the complement relative pronouns like which, who, or that.
But we can't arbitrary omit the subjective relative pronouns like which, who, or that except for some exceptions.
And we can never omit the relative pronouns 'what'

I see that what you're actually trying to do is improv
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Thank you no name one for your elaborate answer.
Can't the adjectives which need "who be" be used as the restrictive use?

7) I was happy looking at my daughter surprised at a sudden present.
I was happy to see my daughter's surprise at the unexpected present. (Wording needs to be changed.)
Couldn't you think #7 as "I was happy
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I'd like to revive this thread.
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"I was happy while looking at my daughter surprised at a sudden present." is not right. The phrase "I was happy" is not used like this. "my daughter surprised" is not a valid phrase in English. "a sudden present" is not used in English.
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"I saw a man capable of lifting a truck." is correct. However, "I heard of a man critical of what you have written." is not right. In this instance, you have to put in the "who": "I heard of a man who is critical of what you have written." The "who" in this type of construction cannot always be omitted.
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Thank you, no name one, for your continuing support. Emotion: smile
I see that my examples are clumsy and awkward, but how about a point of vi
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Where the "who" can be omitted and where it has to be put in is determined by the situation, and these have to be learned by experience, as there is no rule that can cover every situation.

"It is a play productive of the strongest emotions." is not right. The word "productive" is not used like this. You'd say instead something like:

It is a play that produces the strongest em
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I don't know whether or not you are the one who posted the post immediately preceding yours, but I will think so.
Thank you no name one for your continuing to answer.

"It is a play productive of the strongest emotions." is not right. The word "productive" is not used like this. You'd say instead something like:

It is a play that produces the strongest emotions.

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