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Park sang joon Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
I'd like to ask for validation for an email
Please, see the below content of email and validate the sentences.
Hi
It looks like the package you have sent is missing.
It must have arrived in three weeks.
When I consider that even though five weeks have passed it hasn't arrived, It might be missing.
A delivery problem in your shop hasn't occurred so far, so I am flustered with the missing package.
I am going to repurchase the same; could you offer a 50 discount coupon?
If I have to answer for all of the loss, it will be so unfair.
In advance, thank you for your help.
Hi
It looks like the package you have sent is missing.
It must have arrived in three weeks.
When I consider that even though five weeks have passed it hasn't arrived, It might be missing.
A delivery problem in your shop hasn't occurred so far, so I am flustered with the missing package.
I am going to repurchase the same; could you offer a 50 discount coupon?
If I have to answer for all of the loss, it will be so unfair.
In advance, thank you for your help.
Top answer
Dear Mr [surname], It looks like the package you sent is lost. It should have arrived in three weeks, but it has been five weeks now. This is the first time I have had a delivery problem with your shop.
- Dear Mr [surname], It looks like the package you sent is lost.
- It should have arrived in three weeks, but it has been five weeks now.
- This is the first time I have had a delivery problem with your shop.
- I would like to repurchase the same.
- Could you offer a 50% discount?
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Dear Mr [surname],
It looks like the package you sent is lost. It should have arrived in three weeks, but it has been five weeks now.
This is the first time I have had a delivery problem with your shop.
I would like to repurchase the same. Could you offer a 50% discount?
Sincerely yours,
It looks like the package you sent is lost. It should have arrived in three weeks, but it has been five weeks now.
This is the first time I have had a delivery problem with your shop.
I would like to repurchase the same. Could you offer a 50% discount?
Sincerely yours,
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Thank you for your correction, Mister Micawber.
Your version looks much better.
I'd like to know whether my version is ungrammatical or only clumsy.
Your version looks much better.
I'd like to know whether my version is ungrammatical or only clumsy.
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It is non-native in tone and phrasing as well as having grammar mistakes.
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