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Nicetomeetyou Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

I'd appreciate your help with this.

I'd really appreciate it if you could check this and see if there are any mistakes.


To achieve a successful carreer in a movie industry, it's not enough

just to wait for an opportunity to come to you. It's imporant to try

your hardest to grab an opportunity, no matter what it takes.

  

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The only thing that doesn't make sense is 'a' instead of 'the' before 'movie industry'. There is only one movie industry, albeit one which is spread around the world, so use 'the'.

  • The only thing that doesn't make sense is 'a' instead of 'the' before 'movie industry'.
  • There is only one movie industry, albeit one which is spread around the world, so use 'the'.
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The only thing that doesn't make sense is 'a' instead of 'the' before 'movie industry'. There is only one movie industry, albeit one which is spread around the world, so use 'the'.

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