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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

I'd appreciate it if you could check this:)

Good doctors are those who put their patients' health first. Therefore, they should tell their patients to cut down on calories even if the patients really enjoy satisfying their appetites. They should do this even if it's against their patients' will. However uncomfortable it may make the patients feel, they should stick to the principle that health is more important than anything else so that their patients won't have to suffer from more serious disease.
  

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I'd appreciate it if you could check this short paragraph about good doctors. Good doctors are those who put their patients' health first. Therefore, they should tell their patients to cut down on calories even if the patients really enjoy (overeating) satisfying their appetites.

— AlpheccaStars

  • I'd appreciate it if you could check this short paragraph about good doctors.
  • Good doctors are those who put their patients' health first.
  • Therefore, they should tell their patients to cut down on calories even if the patients really enjoy (overeating) satisfying their appetites.
  • They should do this even if it's against their patients' wishes .
  • However uncomfortable it may make the patients feel, they should stick to the principle that health is more important than anything else so that their patients won't have to suffer from more serious disease s .
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I'd appreciate it if you could check this short paragraph about good doctors.

Good doctors are those who put their patients' health first. Therefore, they should tell their patients to cut down on calories even if the patients really enjoy (overeating) satisfying their appetites. They should do this even if it's against their patients' wishes. However uncomfort
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Thank you very much for showing me how to make an appropriate subject line. And let me apologize for having posted several questions with the same subject line!! I'll be careful when I post a new answer like this. Also, thank you very much for your corrections:)
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