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Changeling Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

iceberg lettuce

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00I'm trying to write an article about iceberg lettuce. Could you, please, check the following sentences. If you come up with any creative ideas, that will be great. This forum really helps me to get better understanding of English! 02br
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00Iceberg lettuce is a type of crisp-head lettuce. Its light green leaves are formed into a densely packed head that weights about 2 pounds. Iceberg lettuce is amazingly juicy and crispy and it can be stored for a long time. It is good to season iceberg salads with olive oil.02br
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00 Leaf lettuce is becoming increasingly popular in cookery these days. One reason is that nothing could be healthier than lettuce. Although lettuce is juicy, it ranks first among low-cal food (lettuce contains only 12 kcal/100g). And that's what those watching their weight love about it. Lettuce and vegetables are often a core of various “green” slim diets. 02br
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0I spotted a typo and a couple of other things that I'd change or consider changing: 02br 02br 01font 00Iceberg lettuce is a type of crisp-head lettuce. Its light green leaves are formed into a densely packed head that 01del 00weights02del 00 01b 00weighs02b 00 about 01del 00202del 00 01b 00two02b 00 pounds. Iceberg lettuce is amazingly juicy and crispy and it can be stored for a long time.

  • 0I spotted a typo and a couple of other things that I'd change or consider changing: 02br 02br 01font 00Iceberg lettuce is a type of crisp-head lettuce.
  • Its light green leaves are formed into a densely packed head that 01del 00weights02del 00 01b 00weighs02b 00 about 01del 00202del 00 01b 00two02b 00 pounds.
  • Iceberg lettuce is amazingly juicy and crispy and it can be stored for a long time.
  • It is good to season iceberg salads with olive oil.
  • Leaf lettuce is becoming increasingly popular in cookery these days.
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0I spotted a typo and a couple of other things that I'd change or consider changing: 02br
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01font00Iceberg lettuce is a type of crisp-head lettuce. Its light green leaves are formed into a densely packed head that 01del00weights02del00 01b00weighs02b00 about 01del00202del0

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