I´stuck with my motivation letter please help!

Hello everyone,

I’m in the middle of writing my motivation letter for the postgraduate studies and my brain stopped. I need to finish this letter over the weekend. Since, the dead line is next week. If someone can give me some tips like am I on a good way, did I missed something, what to add, how to connect my thoughts in this letter etc., I’ll be grateful.

Here is the letter (actually my notes)

I studied Organizational Science with specialization in Management at . The emphasis of my studies was understanding the Management in general that covers a lot of diverse topics such as Project Management, HR, Marketing, PR, Operational Research, Statistics, IT, Finance, etc. I found Finance to be very interesting and exciting because as a financier you can be involved in the great moments of the corporate life cycle (the financial equivalents of birth, marriage and death).

In recent years the industry has undergone big changes in many parts of the world. The privatization trend and the globalization of the financial industry had forced merges and restructurings as well as the arrival of the single currency in that has been another important catalyst of change. Investors can now move money across borders, markets have been liberalized and barriers to foreign entrants have disappeared. My career aspiration is to becoming a part of these changes; understand what is happening on the market, how companies operated, the effects on stock prices, etc. To do so, in I need more knowledge in Finance area.

xxx universities are generally known for their traditional nature and strict compliance with legal restrictions. Also, is considered as a financial and business European centre. Striving for a better education in Finance area, I have come to the conclusion that the possibility of studying and graduating at one of the top universities in the xxx country-region u1:st="on"> may represent my lifetime’s opportunity to gain needed knowledge and experience. I am deeply convinced that studying at xxx can be a perfect place to prepare myself to face the challenges of the business world.

WHAT NOW? I JUST SOPPED!