I wrote the essay to describe a table chart for Ielts test. Please he to correct it and give me the score which I may get, thanks a lot

The table chart compares the percentage of the population with various age groups who used bicycles in one region in one region.

It is cleared that the percentage of both female and male citizens with the age from 0 to 9 who rode bikes was highest in 2011.

The portion of women from to 9 years old choosing bikes for moving was highest at 51.3 percent, followed by the figure for male citizens from 10 to 17 years old at 42.2 percent. Male had the highest portion of the population in the age group off 0 to 9 who rode bicycles at 50,3 percent while the data for “ age group 10-17” was second high at 24.6 percent. The portion of female citizens at the age of 18 to 39 was 17.1 percent.

There was 9.7 percent of male inhabitants with the age from 18 to 39 who were interested in using bikes in the town. The portion of female residents in the age off 40 to 59 riding bikes was 4.3 percent higher than that figure for men. 18.5 percent off female in the age group over 65 years old drove bikes in the town. There was 13.2 percent off male population over 60 years old who used bikes in the town in 2011.