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Essay topics: Some people think that planning for future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People in support that thinking of the future is time-consuming so a concentration of the reality is more significant. As supposed to them, I wholly disagree with the idea that people need to spend on present than on the future.
Initially, preparation for the future will bring them energy and inspiration for people to try to complete proposed plans and targets. They will be willing to take a risk to pass every challenge even it is uphill to reach all their dreams as well as hopes for more successful careers. If they don't own any futurity goals, they just spend time on trivial things so they will have an uncertain future. For instance, Barbara McClintock had been dreaming of being a physicist when she was young. Then she started to work harder to make her dream real. she delicated days and months of time on experimenting, taking part in a science club and staying up until midnight to finish her science homework. Because she had a clear purpose and was ambitious, she always tried her best to excel everything regarding science.

Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that persons who decided for future often have a lot of good qualities which will help them to adjust to any stressful environment when they work. If there are unexpected problems occur or something make them unable to understand, in lieu of ignoring, they will find the troubles until they comprehend patiently. Therefore, patience plays an important role for people to apprehend knowledge for their bright future. Moreover, creativity is one of the most admirable characters they gradually develop throughout planning process. They make use of this quality to create new and wonderful products to contribute to making their countries more prosperous.

Overall, I suppose that future planning is crucial on account of its motivation for people to follow their wishes besides personality improvement.

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Ð? HuongPeople in support that thinking of the future is time-consuming

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People in support that thinking of the future is time-consuming so a concentration of the reality is more significant. ( Incomprehensible)

A significant number of people believe that dwelling on or making plans for the future is a waste of time. Their motto might be "Carpe Diem."

As supposed to them, I wholly disagree with the idea that people need to spend on present than on the future.

Initially, preparation for the future will bring them energy and inspiration for people to try to complete proposed plans and targets.

If one prepares for the future, they will be inspired and energized to reach their goals, complete their projects and hit their targets.

They will be willing to take a risk to pass every challenge, even it is extremely difficult. ~~uphill~~ to reach all their dreams as well as hopes for more successful careers. If they don't own any futurity goals, (unnatural. There is no such thing as a futurity goal. ) they just spend time on trivial things so they will have an uncertain future.

If they have no idea of where they are going, or how they plan to get there, they will fritter away their time; their future will be uncertain.

For instance, Barbara McClintock had been dreaming of being a physicist when she was young. Then she started to work harder to make her dream real. she delicated days and months of time on experimenting, taking part in a science club and staying up until midnight to finish her science homework. Because she had a clear purpose and was ambitious, she always tried her best to excel everything regarding science.

Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that persons who decided for future (Unnatural. We cannot decide the future, because it is always uncertain, except for some "gods". ) often have a lot of good qualities which will help them to adjust to any stressful environment when they work. If there are unexpected problems occur (Ungrammatical clause structure. If there are unexpected problems that occur..) or something make them unable to understand, (Ungrammatical clause structure) ~~in lieu of~~ instead of ignoring them, they will find the troubles until they comprehend patiently. (Ungrammatical - I have no idea what this means.)

Therefore, patience plays an important role for people to apprehend knowledge for their bright future. Moreover, creativity is one of the most admirable characters (wrong word) they gradually develop throughout the planning process. They make use of this quality to create new and wonderful products to contribute to making their companies more profitable. ~~countries more prosperous~~.

Overall, I assert / claim / believe ~~suppose~~ that future planning is crucial on account of its motivation for people to follow their wishes besides personality improvement.

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