I wrote an essay about using a computer. I hope you help me check it.
When I was a kid, I rarely used the computer just because my home didn't have a computer. At that time, the economy was developing and the people in my area were at a low-income level. So there are not many people who got a chance to use a computer. I thought that the computer is a magical thing and I always wanted to own one. Now, I use the computer every day and it has become a very important thing for my work. I also like to use it for entertainment like watching movies, listening to music.
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nguyenhoang I wrote an essay What you wrote is just one paragraph. Were you supposed to write an essay instead? When I was a kid, I rarely used the compute r s just because my we didn’t have one at hom e.
- nguyenhoang I wrote an essay What you wrote is just one paragraph.
- Were you supposed to write an essay instead?
- When I was a kid, I rarely used the compute r s just because my we didn’t have one at hom e.
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- At that time, the economy my country was developing underdeveloped and the people in my area were at a had lo w i ncom e, level.
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nguyenhoangI wrote an essay
What you wrote is just one paragraph. Were you supposed to write an essay instead?
When I was a kid, I rarely used the computers just because my we didn’t have one at hom
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